I like the color of your header text. That was more what I was trying to go with but some how I ended up with a grayish color. I like how you laid out the text and the pictures. It looks like each section could be a separate white paper but at the same time it has the cohesion of one white paper. I almost wonder whether all the subheaders should be the same color as the main header and then underlined or italized to stand out from the body text and the header. Right under the main header text would be a great place to put a summary box and not have to worry about losing a lot of space. You also did a good job making use of white space to prevent it from looking cluttered.
We came up with very similar thumbnails. To be honest I don’t really have to much to say, being that I came up with something very similar.I think it would be helpful to have a main header on the page, maybe something that repeats every page. I think turning the first paragraph into a summary box of some sort is a great idea. I kept thinking the left side was a little lopsided until I realized this paragraph was slightly larger than the rest. I also wondered how everyone comes up with this crazy looking foreign text looking type. I just copy and past a few line of “sample text” throughout mine.
I like the image that you used; I also found that image in one of my sources and thought that it was definitely one that we should use as well as the other images from that same sources of the other systems. It was nice that you used different colors, I did not get that creative but it looks much more attractive to use color. It creates interest, and definition between the different sections. I think that it would be nice to include a section of pros and cons, or perhaps what types of locations your systems works best for. Nice job.
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I like the color of your header text. That was more what I was trying to go with but some how I ended up with a grayish color. I like how you laid out the text and the pictures. It looks like each section could be a separate white paper but at the same time it has the cohesion of one white paper. I almost wonder whether all the subheaders should be the same color as the main header and then underlined or italized to stand out from the body text and the header. Right under the main header text would be a great place to put a summary box and not have to worry about losing a lot of space. You also did a good job making use of white space to prevent it from looking cluttered.
Andy
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We came up with very similar thumbnails. To be honest I don’t really have to much to say, being that I came up with something very similar.I think it would be helpful to have a main header on the page, maybe something that repeats every page. I think turning the first paragraph into a summary box of some sort is a great idea. I kept thinking the left side was a little lopsided until I realized this paragraph was slightly larger than the rest. I also wondered how everyone comes up with this crazy looking foreign text looking type. I just copy and past a few line of “sample text” throughout mine.
I like the image that you
I like the image that you used; I also found that image in one of my sources and thought that it was definitely one that we should use as well as the other images from that same sources of the other systems. It was nice that you used different colors, I did not get that creative but it looks much more attractive to use color. It creates interest, and definition between the different sections. I think that it would be nice to include a section of pros and cons, or perhaps what types of locations your systems works best for. Nice job.