Overall, I like the layout and design of your thumbnail. Some of the obvious pro’s include the simple and effective color scheme, much like Brandon’s and Jeff’s. Also, you’ve managed to arrange the graphics inline with the text effectively. I find this hard to do but your graphics contain enough white space to be readable, while drawing attention to the image. There are only 2 critiques I would suggest. First, I think the use of horizontal lines to underline each header is used excessively. Perhaps if only the top level headers were underlined and the subheaders' font was formatted differently to denote each individual subsection. Finally, although both graphics look fine inline, I think it would benefit the overall theme if only the data tables were included inline, and the images/figures were isolated. Still, your theme is clean and effective and I anticipate that we will incorporate many of your thumbnail’s design features into our final white paper draft.
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Overall, I like the layout and design of your thumbnail. Some of the obvious pro’s include the simple and effective color scheme, much like Brandon’s and Jeff’s. Also, you’ve managed to arrange the graphics inline with the text effectively. I find this hard to do but your graphics contain enough white space to be readable, while drawing attention to the image. There are only 2 critiques I would suggest. First, I think the use of horizontal lines to underline each header is used excessively. Perhaps if only the top level headers were underlined and the subheaders' font was formatted differently to denote each individual subsection. Finally, although both graphics look fine inline, I think it would benefit the overall theme if only the data tables were included inline, and the images/figures were isolated. Still, your theme is clean and effective and I anticipate that we will incorporate many of your thumbnail’s design features into our final white paper draft.