English 420Y - Business Writing Online

Attached the draft as a pdf.
Edit: Forgot the grayscale version. Attached it now.

Attached in a .pdf file are our two brochures - color and grayscale.

Gen Info brochure attached as a PDF file

Your comments are welcome!!!!

I have attached the Caring for Your Pet Brochure for Group 2.

Hear is our general information brochure for The Clinton Humane Society!

Here are our first draft brochures.

Attached as a pdf are Group 5's brochures. There is a color version and a grey scale version!

After reading Chapter 37 in The Thompson Handbook, I think that our group did a pretty good job of having variety and emphasis in our brochure. We did not use the same sentence lengths the whole time and had some points broken up with bullets. The different lengths provide variety to the reader when they are reading the brochure and the bulleted points emphasis the points that are being made under our headings. I'm sure that if we looked a little closer we might be able to add even more variety to our sentence patterns and word order.

Here are both the color and grayscale versions of the first draft of our brochure. Enjoy!