Oh, crap, this is late-totally misread the calendar...
Please don't mark my group-mates off for not replying to this for the assignment as I'm just posting it now.
The images didn't show up when I printed to PDF for some reason, but there are supposed to be graphics there that are translucent-I made text boxes that explain this.
Charts
I like the idea of presenting charts. No one else had that in their thumbnails form our group. Charts really allow people to compare the different types of phones and make decisions. We can have other types of charts too such as line and pie charts. They will make our white paper look more professional and more objective rather than subjective. Also, charts are a great attention-getter.
nice touch
I agree having the bar chart really made your thumbnail stand out to me. This to me will allow the audience to have another type of visual comparison of what is offered with each phone. Like Emil was saying it has adds a touch of professionalism to the thumbnail. Also with the choice of the bar graph was correct so you can actually make a good interpolation of comparing the 3 phones.
I feel if we add the graph to the White Paper, that is will be a great benefit to the audience seeing how each of the phones compare to one another.
Zebulon Rouse
Feedback
I also do like the idea of using charts. It is a good way to compare a lot of the statistics about the phones in a new and interesting way. Maybe one possible idea for a chart could be comparing the talk time or battery time between the three different phones.
Overall I like your general layout, but for something like my research I think that it will prove best to have a more straightforward section of our white paper. Maybe something with just a header and a picture would be good for mine, but considering the whole layout I like where your head is at.