Zeb, I like how your thumbnail went through the entire white paper, instead of just doing a general thumbnail like mine. I think that you had a good idea by making your thumbnail for the entire paper. I just thought I would make my thumbnail show the general color/layout scheme of our paper in general.
I think that if we combine our two designs and possibly some of our other group member’s designs, if they made any, we should be able to have a pretty good design. I like the way you layed out all of our different research topics, but maybe we could add in some design work like mine or negotiate what we want for it.
Pretty much we just need to combine your layout with my design or one like it.
Submitted by HiggsBoson on Fri, 04/17/2009 - 21:45.
Zeb, I think you have a good start, and when combined with mine and Joey's I think we can make a really good thumbnail. The page number is something I didn't think of, I like it. Something else you've brought to my attention are the different sections. We will probably have to make different thumbnails for each section or even page since each topic will probably be handled differently with different graphics,pictures,etc. I like that the phone pictures are all at the beginning of the document, but we may need to add captions beneath each picture. Looks great!
I really like the idea of having the pictures of the phones at the start. I think it's a great attention grabber especially since most of the phones actually look quite cool.
However, I think that the rest of the paper could benefit from some layout redesign. It seem that you suggest that we somply have sections and subsections. It would be great to spice things up by having columns and images throughout the paper. In fact, one major addition we can have is tables that compares phones by operating systems, applications available, and hardware specs.
Good job
Zeb, I like how your thumbnail went through the entire white paper, instead of just doing a general thumbnail like mine. I think that you had a good idea by making your thumbnail for the entire paper. I just thought I would make my thumbnail show the general color/layout scheme of our paper in general.
I think that if we combine our two designs and possibly some of our other group member’s designs, if they made any, we should be able to have a pretty good design. I like the way you layed out all of our different research topics, but maybe we could add in some design work like mine or negotiate what we want for it.
Pretty much we just need to combine your layout with my design or one like it.
Ok
Ok, now I understand what you were going for on your thumbnail.
I think you have a good idea with combining our thumbnails.
Zebulon Rouse
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Zeb, I think you have a good start, and when combined with mine and Joey's I think we can make a really good thumbnail. The page number is something I didn't think of, I like it. Something else you've brought to my attention are the different sections. We will probably have to make different thumbnails for each section or even page since each topic will probably be handled differently with different graphics,pictures,etc. I like that the phone pictures are all at the beginning of the document, but we may need to add captions beneath each picture. Looks great!
Nice start
I really like the idea of having the pictures of the phones at the start. I think it's a great attention grabber especially since most of the phones actually look quite cool.
However, I think that the rest of the paper could benefit from some layout redesign. It seem that you suggest that we somply have sections and subsections. It would be great to spice things up by having columns and images throughout the paper. In fact, one major addition we can have is tables that compares phones by operating systems, applications available, and hardware specs.