English 420Y - Business Writing Online

Attached here is the press release. Please leave suggestions so I know how can I improve myslef.

After reading the articles assigned for this week, I can say that Jet Blue handled the situation effectively and ethically.

EMPLOYMENT PROJECT PDF

I found the following article to be very interesting concerning the jetblue crisis.
The article is on the following link:
http://www.my3cents.com/companyOverview.cgi?code=605

Hey Guys this is my cover Letter.
I would love to get your valuable responses.
Thank you.

Looking at the resumes initially took me a lot of time. Now I can really understand how it feels to go through tons of them. I mean, to read through them carefully and to pick out the best one can be really painful. The first thing that I saw in the resume was the structure of the resume and the work experience. I mean if the resume looked too squished or difficult to read then I would skip the resume. I also saw the level of important and relevance of the material. If the above points seemed ok then I would go ahead and read the resume carefully.

Hey guys this is my resume.
Any feedback or comments are welcomed.

The article “Boss's Angry Email Sends Shares Plunging,” made a great point about emails as well as human behavior. I believe that Mr. Patterson’s didn’t do the right thing by sending such an email to all his employees because his language used was rough. I agree with the point of view that he wanted to bring about a change in working style of the company but he could have opted different ways to bring about that but again its human nature that when a person is angry he doesn’t think twice before doing something.

This is an internship opportunity with a privately held medical device company in San Jose, California. An Intern would be working in a lab, Executing complex experiments which will be involving blood samples while following written protocols and safety procedures related to bio-hazardous materials. The Interns main focus would be on optimizing the reagent systems to quantify glucose. It will also give an Intern opportunity to meet all kinds of vendors to carry through parts and supplies.

Work Experience:
1. Position: Lab Assistant
Location: RT chemicals, Mumbai, India
Manager: Jayen Shah
Date of employment: 05/07- present.
Requirements: Prepare chemicals, keep a check on machines and carry out reactions.

Position: Cashier
Location: Mc Donald’s, Mumbai, India
Manager: Satish kaushik
Date of employment: 5/06-8/06
Requirements: Take Orders, Make daily accounts.

Position: Teacher
Location: Pratham, Mumbai, India
Manager: Elizabeth Fernandez
Date of Employment: 5/03-8/05
Requirements: Teach street Children Basic Mathematics.