English 420Y - Business Writing Online

I have attached my final corporate project.

Attached is my draft of my business letter.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SOo-tG9q2h0&mode=related&search=

Any comments or suggestions would be appreciated. As you read through, let me know if you think I have enough detail. This is one of my biggest initial concerns. Thanks!

After reading several articles about the JetBlue crisis, I found it rather difficult to assess the way the company handled the situation. At times it seemed like the company did a good job, but at others it seemed to me like they could have handled it a lot better. It is understandable that the terrible weather that occurred at JFK airport would cause many delays, as it did. However, I feel that a company in the airline business should have some sort of a bad weather plan, because it is always a factor in the business.

I have attached my Final Employment Project. It contains work starting from beginning my job search with finding and interpreting job advertisements to the end with writing a resume and cover and letter.

http://crisisblogger.wordpress.com/2007/02/19/can-jetblue-recover/

Here is my cover letter. Open to comments and suggestions.

After reading through all the resumes in this activity, I chose the resumes on page 5, 8, 9, 26, and 32. All the resumes I chose that an appealing layout to me, which made me want to read them more than others and actually is part of the reason that I chose them. However, my main way of evaluating them was this. I read the objective and then looked through their resume for experience doing whatever it was they said they wanted to do or could do in the objective. If I saw experience, I read through the information more thoroughly.

Open to comments and suggestions. Thanks!