English 420Y - Business Writing Online

There is no "OBJECTIVE" line. During interviews I was given the advice that when applying and interviewing for internships your objective is obvious and therefore become redundant for the reader.

I know I need a lot of help. Thank you in advance for any comments!

Cristina

I did not include a objective statement.

Here is a copy of my resume. Any comments would be great

My resume is attached and any suggestions would be greatly appreciated!

Well i am having a horrible time getting this to attach right now so i have copied it below.

Elizabeth Snyder
2101 Cumberland Ave Apt 5201
West Lafayette, IN
219-716-8202
esnyder@purdue.edu
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Career Objective
To obtain a position in a small animal emergency clinic that will allow me to use my skills to help stabilize and treat critical patients as well as mentor clients.

Education

Purdue University (2007) Bachelor of Sciences, Major in Animal Sciences

I need quite a bit of help, I can never make up my mind about what looks good. Especially for activities and skills. I felt like the readings left that a little more open so I'm ready for criticism. Be gentle...

Here's my resume, I welcome any comments. Thanks, Nick

For some reason I can't figure out how to attach my resume so I just copied it below. Sorry for the inconvience, any helpfull comments are welcome. I do have some bold words and stuff but they didn't show up since I had to copy it.

Cory Mlinac

Home Address: School Address:
33139 Shannon Dr. 235 Littleton St. Apt. 2

Click the attachment for my resume. Feel free to leave comments. Thanks

From the readings of the past couple days, we can really start to grasp the importance of writing resumes. Reading the posts that were given Monday, I have a new understanding of what I should and should not include in my own personal resume. Honestly if I had not read through each one of the texts provided, I can almost guarantee I would have cluttered up my writing with a bunch of nonsense that would have been irrelevant to the point of the job I was applying for.