English 420Y - Business Writing Online

My resume is attached and any suggestions would be greatly appreciated!

Well i am having a horrible time getting this to attach right now so i have copied it below.

Elizabeth Snyder
2101 Cumberland Ave Apt 5201
West Lafayette, IN
219-716-8202
esnyder@purdue.edu
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Career Objective
To obtain a position in a small animal emergency clinic that will allow me to use my skills to help stabilize and treat critical patients as well as mentor clients.

Education

Purdue University (2007) Bachelor of Sciences, Major in Animal Sciences

I need quite a bit of help, I can never make up my mind about what looks good. Especially for activities and skills. I felt like the readings left that a little more open so I'm ready for criticism. Be gentle...

Here's my resume, I welcome any comments. Thanks, Nick

For some reason I can't figure out how to attach my resume so I just copied it below. Sorry for the inconvience, any helpfull comments are welcome. I do have some bold words and stuff but they didn't show up since I had to copy it.

Cory Mlinac

Home Address: School Address:
33139 Shannon Dr. 235 Littleton St. Apt. 2

Click the attachment for my resume. Feel free to leave comments. Thanks

Here is my resume. Please give me any feedback or advise.

Thanks,
Rachel

Any criticism is helpful and will be greatly appreciated.

This is my resume used for gaining entry to a summer internship with a construction firm. Let me know if you have anything you want to add to help!

Open to helpful suggestions!

This is my resume. Your comments will really help me improving it.