English 420Y - Business Writing Online

I have never done one of these before. Short and sweet

http://www.usatoday.com/travel/news/2007-02-17-jetblue-flights_x.htm

This is the URL. Please let me know if one can not see it.

This came from Wikipedia: JetBlue Airways is a major American low-cost airline owned by JetBlue Airways Corporation (NASDAQ: JBLU). The company is headquartered in the Forest Hills neighborhood of the borough of Queens in New York City. Its home airport is John F. Kennedy International Airport. JetBlue is a non-union airline.

this is my press release. It was really hard for me since i have never written one before. please feel free to leave comments.

Would really appreciate some feedback.

Please leave suggestions. Assistance needed.

Any suggestions would be appreciated! Thanks!

Please critique!

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I know I need a lot of advise!! I'm open to all of them!!

Thanks,

Cristina