English 420Y - Business Writing Online

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Please feel free to comment! I had to use adobe because it wouldn't attach as a Word document. Please let me know how to attach a word document. Thanks!!

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Find attached the press release. Fell free to comment so that i can make it better.

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Attached is my Press Release, please leave me comments. Thank you

Here is the first draft of my press release. Comments/suggestions are very welcome!

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Here is my press release, let me know what you think!