English 421Y: Technical Writing Online

1. I wanted to have a semi-friendly tone but didn't want to cross over the line. Should I consider trying to be a little more friendly?
2. Did I suggest my potential for the company's goals effectively?

Two things:
1) Does the letter seem too redundant?
2) Should I include the address at the top even though it is on my resume already?

Questions to be answered:
1. Do I need more detailed information regarding previous experience?
2. Does the overall formatting and structure appear to be professional?

The two things I would like to know are:
-Does the formatting lose or draw your attention/why?
-Did I go too deep or not deep enough into awards, jobs, or personal interests?

1. Do I need to go into more detail about my experience/education?

2. Is my tone too rigid?