English 420Y - Business Writing Online

Please give me feedback and comments! I will greatly appreciate it! Thanks!

Here is my cover letter for HDR Design Build for a position as a project manager intern. Any help will be greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance.

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It needs to be shorter! Feedback is appreciated!

Attached is my cover letter. Please comment on it.

Thanks,
Bryce

Please offer any and all comments you have. THANKS!

Here is my cover letter. Open to comments and suggestions.

All comments and suggestions are well appreciated!