English 420Y - Business Writing Online

I have a word document for all the press releases that I write, just for consistency in form, so if anyone is interested, please let me know and I'll email the template.

Help me out and give me some information

this is my press release. It was really hard for me since i have never written one before. please feel free to leave comments.

Would really appreciate some feedback.

Please leave suggestions. Assistance needed.

Any suggestions would be appreciated! Thanks!

Please critique!

Feel free to give me any feedback!

I know I need a lot of advise!! I'm open to all of them!!

Thanks,

Cristina

I look forward to your feedback