English 420Y - Business Writing Online

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Here is my cover letter. I know it needs a lot of work. Any comments would be helpfull.
Also I am pasting another link of the Job Ad because the ad is not on career builder anymore which is where the original link was from.

http://www.careersinfood.com/index.cfm/fuseaction/jobsearchdetails/JobID...

Hey Guys this is my cover Letter.
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Here is my cover letter for HDR Design Build for a position as a project manager intern. Any help will be greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance.

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