English 420Y - Business Writing Online

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Always welcome for any comments or suggestions! Thank you!

Here is my press release.It is my first time writing one of these so any suggestions would be helpful.

Here's my press release draft. I appreciate any comments and advices to improve it!

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Please leave comments on my press release. I have never written one of these and found it extremely difficult. Thanks for your help!

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I hope that I did this right. I was having problems with my computer to begin with, and then I did not understand the homework completely. Hopefully this is a passing grade.

Any comments or suggestions would be appreciated. As you read through, let me know if you think I have enough detail. This is one of my biggest initial concerns. Thanks!