English 420Y - Business Writing Online

Here's my press release draft. I appreciate any comments and advices to improve it!

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Please leave comments on my press release. I have never written one of these and found it extremely difficult. Thanks for your help!

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Any comments or suggestions would be appreciated. As you read through, let me know if you think I have enough detail. This is one of my biggest initial concerns. Thanks!

Here is my press release. Any and all peer edits will be greatly appreciated.

Attached is my press release draft. Thanks for the feedback!