English 420Y - Business Writing Online

This week we received the feedback on our brochure from Ryan. Overall both our brochures did nicely but could definitely be edited to be more professional and geared toward the Clinton County Humane Society. Daniel did some editing on the general brochure's design. It took into account the color scheme and toned down the color so that it was more reader friendly. When I got the revised design on Monday afternoon, I looked at the reviewed brochure and made many changes to the content. First, I edited the directions to the CCHS on the back panel.

This week wasn’t as productive as last week. We had some communication problems that kind of let everyone in doubt of what was going on. However, we were able to get the necessary work done and successfully complete our second draft of the brochure. Again, my main task for the week was to make sure that our design was correct and that everything was formatted correctly. This proved to be a challenge because we ended up deciding to change the size of our brochure and add another two more panels.

This week, our group continued to work well as a cohesive unit. I began the week by sending out an e-mail to the group on Saturday to decide on a meeting time for Monday to work on the second draft of our project. We decided to meet on Monday around 8:30pm because our entire group could meet at that time instead of having to split the work like at our last meeting. Again, we used an AOL chat room because the class chat provided does not work for most of our members.

Second Draft as as 2 images

Both of our brochures are attached in a .pdf file! Please leave comments!

Both our grayscale and color are attached. We have a few tiny issues but we think it's improving quite a bit.

The brochures for the project are attached

Here is our second draft due today, I managed to fix the problem with the check boxes in both versions to be able to turn it in in .pdf format. Feel free to give us any feedback!

Here are both brochures that Group 5 has so far. These are tri-fold brochures...

Attached are both the caring for your pet brochure and the general brochure. When printed the brochure will be tri-folded!