English 420Y - Business Writing Online

I look forward to your feedback

Open to comments and suggestions.

Feel free to comment. I was pretty unsure what exactly to write.

Your comments are welcome

Here is my press release, any comments would be greatly appreciated. Thanks, Nick

Any and all advice is needed.

Here is my press release! Please give me some feedback!

Attached here is the press release. Please leave suggestions so I know how can I improve myslef.

Here is my press release, feel free to comment. Bryce

Any comment or suggestions are appreciated, thanks.