English 420Y - Business Writing Online

All comments/suggestions are appreciated!

Here is my business letter draft. Please give me some feedback!

Thanks,
Rachel

Here is my letter. Any comments would be helpful

Please give me suggestions! Thanks!

Please give me some useful feedback

Attached is my draft of my business letter.

Attached is my business letter, please give me some ways to make it better, thanks. Also does anyone know what page business letter info is in the book?

This is my business letter to a JetBlue passenger that was delayed during the events of February 14-18. My goal was to offer JetBlue's greatest apologies and hoping the customer would fly on JetBlue again.

Any comments on how I can do anything better will be greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance.