English 420Y - Business Writing Online

I have attached my letter. Thank you in advance for the feedback - it's greatly appreciated!

Let me know if there is anything I can do better or if anything does not sound right. Thanks.

Always wlecome for aby comments and suggestions! Thanks!

Feel free to make any suggestions!

Here is my letter draft. Please make as many comments as possible.

Here is my Business Letter.
Open to any kind of feedback.
Thank you.

Thanks for any comments!

Your comments are welcome

I m attaching the draft for my letter. Please comment so that I can make it better.
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Attached is my business letter draft. Please feel free to make comments. Thank you. Bryce Sexton